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Band 5+: You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, introduce yourself explain how you learned about the internship explain why you would be suitable for the internship

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Dear Sir,

I am writing this letter to express my interest in the recent opening for internship at your Company.

My name is Anand and i am an employee of Novatelscope Company. I am currently working in this company and have completed a 3 year Masters for Marketing internship. I also have experience working as Manager for almost 2 years in a retail industry. I believe my experience in this field will give me great insight to work for your internship opening.

I learn about this internship program through one of my colleagues. I did a proper research about your company before i applied for the position. It was a great honor to know that this company also offer benefits for international students who do internship. As a immigrant student this benefit a are big support for my future.

My current and previous experience in retail snd marketing field is a great asset towards this progra. It will be more effective for me to deliver all my knowledge towards a job field that i have experience.I also have learned the company provides one month training, so this can also help me to get an idea and use my own knowledge and experience in the company.

Looking Forward for your kind response

With Regards

sandra

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

internship: 5

company: 5

experience: 4

field: 3

great: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, introducing the writer, explaining how they learned about the internship, and detailing their suitability. There are some minor lapses in clarity and coherence, and some grammatical errors. To improve, focus on clearer expression and proofreading for accuracy.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider structuring your paragraphs more clearly around the three points mentioned in the task: introducing yourself, explaining how you learned about the internship, and explaining why you are suitable. Transition words could also be used to link ideas more smoothly.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more specific and varied language to describe your skills and experiences. For example, instead of just saying 'great insight,' you could say 'valuable perspective' or 'in-depth understanding.' Also, ensure that your word choices are always accurate and appropriate for a formal letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors throughout the letter that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct tense usage, and article usage (a/an/the). Also, be mindful of sentence structure and avoid run-on sentences. Proofreading carefully before submitting will help catch these errors.

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