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Band 5+: You have recently learned about an opening for an internship at a local company that you are interested in. Write a letter to the director of the company. In your letter, • introduce yourself • explain how you learned about the internship • explain why you would be suitable for the internship

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Dear sir/madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest for an internship position opening at a local company.

I am Navneet kaur, currently pursuing energy systems engineering technology at Mohawk college. After my fourth semester, I’ll have an internship which is required to complete for every student to graduate. Right now, I have started looking for 4 months internship which will be starting from August. I was looking at couple of websites to see if any company is hiring co-op students and then I noticed that your company posted vacancy for designers.

I think i am the right person for this position because I’ve already studied those subjects which you have mentioned in the job duties. I am attaching my resume here, please have a look at it and let me know if you are willing to hire me for this position.

Looking forward to hearing from you.

Thanks

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

internship: 3

which: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task adequately, introducing the writer, explaining how they learned about the internship, and explaining why they are suitable for the position. However, the writer could improve by providing more specific details about the company and the internship, and by expressing their interest more clearly.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is easy to follow, and the writer uses simple cohesive devices to link their ideas. However, the writer could improve by using more sophisticated cohesive devices and by varying their sentence structure to create a more cohesive text.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The writer uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are some errors in word choice (e.g. 'hiring co-op students' instead of 'hiring interns'). The writer could improve by using more precise and formal vocabulary, and by avoiding colloquial expressions.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

The writer uses simple sentence structures accurately, but there are some errors in grammar and punctuation (e.g. missing articles, incorrect use of commas). The writer could improve by using a wider range of sentence structures and by proofreading their work more carefully.

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