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Band 8+: You have recently started a new hobby, but you are finding it more challenging than you expected. Write a letter to a friend who is knowledgeable about this hobby, explaining your difficulties. You should include: - What the hobby is and why you chose it - Specific challenges you are encountering - What kind of advice or help you are seeking from your friend

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Dear Alex,

I hope you’re doing well. I’m writing to tell you about my new hobby photography which I recently picked up after seeing your stunning landscape shots on social media. I thought it would be a relaxing and creative way to spend my weekends, but it has turned out to be far more challenging than I anticipated.

To begin with, I’m struggling to get the right lighting and focus, especially when shooting outdoors. Most of my pictures either turn out too dark or overexposed. I’ve also found it difficult to understand the camera settings things like ISO, shutter speed, and aperture seem complicated to balance. Even though I’ve watched a few tutorials, I still can’t achieve that sharp, vibrant look your photos always have.

Since you’ve been doing photography for years, I was wondering if you could give me a few practical tips. For example, how do you usually set up your camera when the lighting conditions change quickly? Also, if you know any online courses or local workshops for beginners, I’d really appreciate your recommendations.

Looking forward to hearing from you soon and maybe joining you on one of your photo walks someday

Best wishes,

Lochinbek

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Overall Band Score

8.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
Opt for even more advanced words when appropriate.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

9

The letter comprehensively addresses all aspects of the task, clearly explaining the hobby, the challenges faced, and the specific advice sought from the friend. The tone is appropriate and friendly, and the language is used effectively to convey the writer's enthusiasm and frustration. The structure is logical and easy to follow, making it an excellent response.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The paragraphing is logical, and the transitions between ideas are smooth. The use of cohesive devices is effective, contributing to the overall clarity of the letter.

Lexical Resource

8

A good range of vocabulary is used, including specific terms related to photography (ISO, shutter speed, aperture). The language is appropriate for the context and demonstrates a good command of lexical resources. Consider including more sophisticated vocabulary to further enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

8

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with excellent control. There are minimal to no grammatical errors, and the punctuation is accurate throughout. The sentences are well-constructed and contribute to the overall clarity and effectiveness of the letter.

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