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Band 4+: You have seen an advertisement for a community college that needs teachers for night classes. Write a letter to the community college. In your letter: say which advertisement you are answering describe which course(s) you want to teach, and what it/they would be about explain why you would be a suitable teacher

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Dear Sir or Madam,

I hope this letter finds you in good health and high spirits.Recently, I have searched job opportunity which is scheduled a night.I am writing to response to advertisement in public newspaper called “Kun xabarlari”regarding a English teacher at Everest college near my house.When I have finished read this ,I was really interested in it and I would applying this role because I have several knowledge and skills required for position .

If I am given opportunity work as a teacher ,I will ensure that I am very responsible for my work and my lessons are beneficial . To be specific, I have been teaching majority students which want to get international and natinol Certificates essentially IELTS and Cefr.

Two years ago, I had graduated the Westminster which is one of the prestigious and also given me essential experience .I ensured that my teaching technique is ridiculously special.Lastly, I am kindly request you review my information of application and, I would be grateful to you have any questions ,you may connect with me by calls.

Thank you for your consideration.

Yours Faithfully,

Amina Farhodova

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by mentioning the advertisement, the desired position, and the applicant's qualifications. However, it could benefit from a more structured and detailed explanation of the courses and teaching approach.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's message is generally understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is adequate, but the range is limited, and some word choices are not precise or natural. A wider range of vocabulary and more precise language would improve the overall impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and overall impression. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed to achieve a higher score.

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