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Band 7+: You have seen an advertisement from a couple, who live in Australia, for someone to teach their two children your language for a year. Write a letter to the couple. In your letter • explain why you think you would be suitable for the job • say what else you could do for the family • give your reasons for wanting the job Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear ,

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Dear Sir,

I came across your tuition advertisement for teaching English language to your two children. I am writing this to express my interest in this job. Over the years, I have taught English language course to many students. As a native speaker and having great command over this language, I can help your children in the challenges they are facing. My unique teaching approach will allow your children to grasp complex topics easily and will help them to better score in their exams.

Apart from teaching English, I can also help your children in other subjects like Mathematics and Science. I can assist them in completing their home assignments and if they need any help in understanding a particular topic in any of these subjects, I can assist them in it too.

I am looking for an additional part time job to cover my monthly expenses. Also, I believe the best way to give back to the community is by teaching what you have learned.

I am looking forward to hearing back from you.

Regards,

Abdullah.

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Overall Band Score

7

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

teaching: 4

children: 4

english: 3

language: 3

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Task Response

8

You have addressed all aspects of the task well. You have explained why you are suitable, what else you could do for the family, and your reasons for wanting the job.

Coherence & Cohesion

6.5

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. However, there are a few minor grammatical errors that affect the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

7.5

You have used a wide range of vocabulary accurately and appropriately. Your language is clear and concise.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

6.5

You have demonstrated a good range of grammatical structures. However, there are a few minor errors that need to be addressed.

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