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Band 6+: You recently attended a local event in your neighbourhood and had a great time. Write a letter to the organizer. In your letter: Describe the event you attended Say what you especially enjoyed Suggest how it could be improved for next time

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Dear Mr. Steven,

I hope this letter finds you in great health. I am writing to you regarding pre-Diwali celebration that happened last Saturday in the party plot behind our apartment. The food was amazing. I particularly liked the samosas on the last stall. Although the music was a bit slow, the choices of songs were excellent. It kept us grooving all along the time. The only thing I found a bit off was how the face was managed. I saw people littering all over the place which made it very unpleasant to watch.

Though lightnings were done very brilliantly, I felt we could have arranged more brighter shades than the darker on the entrance.

Altogether the party was a hit. I would only suggest that we would arrange a systemic bin at every 15-meter interval to prevent the accumulation of waste and use of brighter lights over the entrance.

Your sincerely,

Rukhsar saiyed

Word Count: 154

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Overall Band Score

6.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. The description of the event is clear, and the suggestions for improvement are relevant and practical. However, more detail could be provided in some areas to enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, but the flow could be improved in places. Some sentences lack a smooth connection to the preceding ones, impacting the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

6.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, although some choices could be more precise and sophisticated. The language is generally accurate and appropriate for the context.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy would significantly enhance the score.

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