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Band 7+: You recently attended a training course for your work. You employer has asked you for your feedback on the training course. Write a letter to your to your employer. In your letter • Remind the employer what the course was about • Explain why the course was useful to you in your work • Suggest why the course may not be suitable for some of your other colleagues

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Dear Ms Karim,

Thank you very much again for sending me on the Workplace Safety course. It was valuable training and I now feel a lot more confident that I know how to prevent accidents in the factory. We covered points such as safe storage, keeping access ways clear and fire safety.

I can report that I have already used the skills I learned; when I noticed some cables that were a trip hazard and also a large bin that was partially blocking the exit, I was able to identity and fix

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those problems straight away-

I understand that employees who started working with us this year have already received this training as part of their orientation but for those who have been here longer, it would be a good opportunity to refresh and add to their knowledge.

It is a well-run course that is very relevant to our workplace and I am grateful for the opportunity.

Many thanks

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all parts of the task, reminding the employer about the course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting why it might not be suitable for all colleagues. There are some minor areas for improvement. For example, the explanation of why the course might not be suitable for some colleagues could be more detailed. Also, the letter could benefit from a more formal closing.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally well-organized and easy to follow. The purpose of each paragraph is clear, and the ideas flow logically. However, there's room for improvement in linking ideas more explicitly. For instance, using transition words or phrases at the beginning of paragraphs could strengthen the connections between them.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate and generally accurate for the task. There's an opportunity to enhance the letter by incorporating a wider range of vocabulary related to workplace safety and training. For example, instead of 'fix those problems,' you could use more specific terms like 'rectify the hazards' or 'implement corrective actions.'

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay close attention to sentence structure and clarity. For example, the sentence 'when I noticed some cables that were a trip hazard and also a large bin that was partially blocking the exit, I was able to identity and fix' could be split into two sentences for better readability and grammatical correctness. Proofreading carefully before submission can help catch these minor errors.

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