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Band 4+: You recently borrowed a valuable item from a neighbor, and unfortunately, it got damaged while in your care. Write a letter to your neighbor explaining what happened. You should include details about: - what item you borrowed and how it got damaged - how you plan to make amends for the damage - when you can discuss the matter further with them.

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dear: my neighborhood

hello how are you?. i hope you very well

i write this letter to tell you about important matter and by this letter i also ask apologize for you.

it is about motorcycle i was borrow a week ago. when i used your motorcycle to visit my relevant i have unexpected incident that i get crash and causes your motorcycle damaged i felt guilty.althouht a damaged not serious but the body of motorcycle is broke and it is make look of motorcycle not nice. for now i put your motorcycle in a workplaceand i realy ask apologize for you.

as an ask apologize, i will responbility to repairing your motorcycle like previously and i hope you received my apologize.

for more clearly, after i arriving in my house i want to meet with you and i think we can discuss about this causes. how about tomorow morning we meet in borneo. i will giving you free to order coffe and snack.

i looking forward for your answer about my invitation to discus.

your faithfully

safri

Word Count: 178

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

motorcycle: 7

about: 5

apologize: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the main points of the task, explaining the situation, offering compensation, and suggesting a time to discuss the matter further. However, the language used is quite basic and contains grammatical errors, which detracts from the overall clarity and impact. To improve, focus on using more precise vocabulary and constructing grammatically correct sentences. Also, pay attention to the tone, ensuring it is appropriately apologetic and sincere.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transitions between points to guide the reader. Paragraphing could be more effective in separating distinct ideas. For example, the apology and the offer to discuss could be in separate paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and sometimes inaccurate ('relevant' instead of 'relative,' 'responbility' instead of 'responsibility'). Expanding your vocabulary and ensuring correct word usage would enhance the letter. Using a wider range of vocabulary would make the letter sound more natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and awkward phrasing. For example, 'i was borrow' should be 'I borrowed,' and 'i realy ask apologize for you' is not grammatically correct. Focus on improving sentence structure and accuracy in grammar to enhance clarity.

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