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Band 4+: You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

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Dear Anna,

I recently bought an automatic washing machine.My friend want to this gadget.

Firstly,I near bought an automatic washing machine.I like it . Because this is working properly.It is washing the clothes very clean. My old clothes look like new clothes. Previously,I did not buy this gadget . But my neighbour advise bought this machine.

I think this facilities don’t work right. Because I bought this machine 2 years ago.I saw it did not work right.I really regret these time. But now I am really happy.

I guess, you will buy washing machine. It will be really lighten your burden. If you buy this machine , you never regret this selection.

In my opinion useful my advice for you . I think you will find the device very helpful.

Yours sincerely,

Nilufar Karimova.

Word Count: 134

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

bought: 4

washing: 4

clothes: 3

machine: 3

really: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by mentioning the gadget, expressing opinions, and suggesting alternatives, although some aspects could be more developed. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but the flow is disrupted by grammatical errors and unclear connections between ideas. Improved sentence structure and logical sequencing would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is functional but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated vocabulary and precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality.

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