24 Hours Only: Get 39% OFF on Our Premium Plan - Check Out Now!

Letter

Band 5+: You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Kenith,

I hope this letter finds you well! I recently purchased a new electric water cooler from the sale store as you know. Now it has been more popular in my area nowadays, and most of the neighbours are buying this product in the sale stores.

It is an absolutely perfect product which is cooling my whole room. Cool water or ice cubes are being used for this machine. I really enjoyed this gadget In this summer whether it was too warm. Electricity consumption is moreless than air condition. So, I believe that It will be save huge sum of my money.

But, it is a little bit expensive than the normal fan. It would rather good than the normal fan. However, while I am shopping I found a another option for your requirements. It might be suits to you budget and your location. It is a small cooling fan. It is not more expensive than the electric water cooler. I recommend it for you. Feel free to contact me for further information.

All the best.

yours truly,

Keth

Word Count: 180

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

water: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. More detail and clarity would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's message is mostly understandable, but some improvements in organization and flow would enhance clarity and cohesion. The grammar errors impact the overall flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

While the letter conveys the message, numerous grammatical errors affect the overall accuracy and range of grammatical structures used. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial.

Answers On The Same Topic:

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Dear Jemu, Hi! How are you? I am writing this letter because I heard that you want to purchase the same television that I recently bought. This television has many advanced features, including Bluetooth, audio recording, Netflix, and more. It’s navy blue in color, very slim, and larger in size. As you know, my old […]

Band 7+

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Dear Jemu, Hi, How are you? I am writing you this letter as I have heard that you want to purchase same television that I have baught it recently. This television has all advanced features like bluetooth, audio recording, netflix and more. It is navy blue in color, very slim and bigger in size. You […]

Band 5+

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Dear John, Hope you are doing well. I am writing this letter to let you know about the electronic appliance that I bought, which you asked me during our last meeting. It is the mixer of Breville company that I bought. It comes with three jars also, doing dough making for pastries is also doable. […]

Band 5+

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Dear Hyunjin, How are you? I hope this letter finds you well. I’m writing this letter to give some advice about an electronic gadget for your home. Two weeks ago, My old vacuum cleaner was broke, so, next day I purchased a new vacuum cleaner which was a brand of Artel. After I bought it, […]

Band 5+

See All

Band 5+: You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

You recently bought an electric gadget for your home. Your friend wants the same gadget and needs your advice. In this letter you should include: ● What the gadget is ● What you think about it ● Advice about other alternatives your friend could buy

Other Topics:

Write a letter to the company. In your letter: explain what you bought and when you received it describe the problem with the product say what action you would like the company to take

You recently visited a local restaurant. The service and food were poor. Write a letter to the restaurant manager. Include: What happened Why you were unhappy What you want them to do

Your company wants to support a nonprofit organization with a donation. Your manager asked you to recommend one. Write a letter explaining which charity you suggest and why it would benefit from the donation

You've been invited to a surprise birthday party for a mutual friend, but you can't make it. Write a letter to the person who invited you. - Thank them for the invitation. - Explain why you can't attend. - Suggest an alternative way to celebrate your friend's birthday.

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Overall Band Score

Task Response

Coherence & Cohesion

Lexical Resource

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

Answers On The Same Topic:

Other Topics:

Plans & Pricing

Free

Premium