Dear Mr. Harry David,
I am writing with regard to the latest book you published a month ago, about “how to be healthy”. I have read it, but unfortunately, I have noticed that it contains a piece of wrong information.
Although, I am consider myself one of your greatest fans, I did not like that book, as it has not delivered the advice correctly.
Actually, aweek ago, I purchased the book and read it with my brother, who is a doctor. We went through chapter one, I found that one page has a sentence states “you can eat whatever you want and then work out to lose the calories. When I discussed that with my brother, he told me that completely wrong.
As you know it, this book might cause a disaster, because the majority of readers may not have a wise mentality to distinguish from the right and wrong in terms of medical information. On top of that some food’s ingredinets may cause some health issues, like high pressure or heart attack. So it is really crucial to adjust that.
Thank you for your understanding and I hope you adjust that wrong sentence in the later edition.
your faithfully,
Adam Smith