Band 6+: You recently read a book and noticed that it contains some incorrect information. Write a letter to the author of the book. In your letter: - explain how you found out the information was wrong - describe the incorrect information - explain why it is important to correct the mistake

Dear Sir,

I am writing to inform you that there is some incorrect information in your book. I would also like you to revise it quickly.

I recently read your book called Wars which helped readers to understand historical wars because I have been interested in military strategies. While reading the book, I realized that you misunderstood Korean War which was occured in 1950. I found out the information was wrong as I was a history teacher and study it for a long time.

You described the start of Korean war from South Korea. However, it is totally wrong because North Korea started to invasion for political reasons. First of all, the Soviet Union offered a lot of military equipment and assets to North Korea and it made North Korea confident. Moreover, North Korea did not fully understand American depence policy regard of South Korea. These elements triggerd Korean war.

I would appreciate it if you could correct the context because there were a lot of countries which joined the war. They volunteered the war for South Korea to save civilians and stop expansion of war after World War 2. We need to prove their choices were meaningful.

If you have any questions of the topic, please let me know.

Yours faithfully,

Donggeon Kim