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Band 4+: You recently signed up for a gym membership, but due to unforeseen circumstances, you need to cancel it before the contract term ends. Write a letter to the gym management explaining your situation. You should include details about: - why you need to cancel the membership early - what steps you have taken so far - what outcome you are hoping for regarding any cancellation fees.

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Dear Ser or Madam. I do hope this letter find you well. I recently signed up to your gym team.But, I have decided I need cancel it.Nonetheless,I am moving in New york city due to the my grandparents hane passed away. It is the reason ,why I willing canel it. It was suddeenly which is occured in 25 may. If you know,I will live about 3-4 years untill this city annoys me.

First of all I will visit to New york city, and absouloutly I will meet my realitives . If they will agree to go bless for my granfparents, we will go to centuary to bless them together.After this plan I would start traveling Naw york city to know better about it, Then I will enter to work as lawyer.There are my all plan about New york.

I do hope. I will achieve my goals such as travelling aroud the world, enter to rhe my drem work,Be haltier by eating useful foods, Doing stretchs and etc. If i being honest it was dreams in my childhood. I expect that ,you will know right about canceling your gym team. And pleace can you rectify thia problem propmtly.Thanks to you for reading me e-mail.

Your sincerly,

Nafisa

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4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter attempts to address the task but includes irrelevant details and lacks clarity in explaining the steps taken and the desired outcome regarding cancellation fees. The tone is also somewhat informal for a formal letter of request. To improve, focus on directly addressing the three bullet points in a clear and concise manner. Remove extraneous details about future plans and maintain a formal tone throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization could be improved for better clarity. The connection between the reason for cancellation and the plans in New York is not clearly established, making it difficult to follow the main point. Focus on directly addressing the three bullet points provided in the task. Use clear topic sentences for each paragraph and ensure a logical flow of information.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to convey the situation effectively. There are instances of unnatural phrasing. To improve, try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to the context of gym memberships, relocation, and cancellation requests. For example, instead of 'cancel it,' consider using 'terminate my membership' or 'request an early cancellation.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors that impede understanding. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense, and word choice. Focus on using correct grammar and punctuation. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. Consider using simpler sentence structures to avoid errors.

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