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Band 5+: You recently stayed in a hotel in a large city. The weather was very unusual for the time of the year and the heating/cooling system in the hotel was quite Inadequate. Write a letter to the manager of the hotel. In your letter give details of what was wrong. - Give details of what was wrong - Explain what you had to do to overcome the problem at that time. - Say what action you would like the manager to take.

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Dear Sir

My Name is Mohammad Hashim. I am staying in pent suite in room 336 of your hotel. I am quite upset that being the reputed hotel, AC in your pent suite is not working.

Yesterday night after attending a late-night meeting I was very tired and hoped for a relaxed sleep in your hotel room. But when I started the AC, it was not working. In this month of summer, I had no option left but to open the window. It was pleasant to have fresh air for a while. But being on the third floor and window facing the main street, I was not able to sleep as car were running all the night.

I would like you to grant my refund for charging very high money for a room with broken AC. If you do not then I have to litigate you. I hope you will reply soon.

Thank You,

Yours Sincerely,

Mohammad Hashim

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Overall Band Score

5.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

hotel: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing details of the problem, the solution implemented, and the desired action. However, the tone could be more polite and less demanding.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be smoother. Some sentences are a bit awkward and could be rephrased for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

5.5

The vocabulary is adequate, but there is room for improvement in using more sophisticated and precise language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4.5

There are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency of the letter. The use of punctuation and sentence structure could be improved.

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