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Band 4+: You recently stayed in a hotel while traveling. Unfortunately, your experience was not very good. Write a letter to the hotel manager. In your letter: – explain when and why you stayed at the hotel – describe the problems you faced – say what you want the manager to do

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Dear Mr. Adam.

My name is Darkhan, and I have some issues with the recent stay at your hotel.

I was in your hotel from May 1st to 17 of May. I was visiting the city on a business trip. I had a room in the second floor. The number of the room is : 207.

In this room always smelled so bad, always when I started to sleep in the 3rd floor was usually a loud noise.

Breakfast was cold as well, when i woke up i wanted to eat some hot food, but instead I am getting the cold fried eggs.

I want apologies from your hotel, and hope that this will not happen anymore.

I am asking to you to fix this issues for the future guests to not get the lowest rating in the Apple Maps.

I would appreciate if you will not skip this letter, and will fix that as much faster as you can. Thank you for your attention to this matter.

Darkhan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing sufficient detail on the stay, problems encountered, and desired resolution. However, the overall clarity and organization could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is somewhat disorganized, and the flow of ideas could be smoother. The numerous grammatical errors impact the overall coherence and readability.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but there's room for improvement in terms of range and precision. More sophisticated language could enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly affect clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for enhancing the overall quality.

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