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Band 4+: You recently took a trip to a country you've always wanted to visit and want to share your experience with a family member. Write a letter to your family member telling them about your trip. You should include details about: - the places you visited and what made them special - the people you met and any interesting stories - what souvenirs you brought back and how you celebrated your memories.

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well, let me talk about my fantastic trip which one i always wanted to visit. one week ago i went to mountain fuji at last. i’ve never visit this mountain although i live near. so, when i got up i’m shocked with this perfect,beautiful and gergous view. yes i’m afraid of heights, but at that moment i forgot about this and enjoyed of this beauty. i never thought it was so relaxed.

there i met a lot of different people, but i was impressed by one couple. the guy asked me recording they and i can’t refuce.then he knelt down and asked her hands and heart. and she said yes. this moment was so perfect.

when i got the top, i bought different souvenirs the such as key rings,toys and cups. when i go back, we with my cousin went to the cinema where we watch movie about this mountain and then we ate pizza. these 2 days were the best days in my life

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
Aim to use more advanced language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

about: 3

mountain: 3

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Task Response

The letter successfully addresses all parts of the task, providing details about the places visited, people met, and souvenirs. The experience is conveyed with enthusiasm.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally easy to follow, with a clear progression of ideas. However, some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve overall flow.

Lexical Resource

A good range of vocabulary is used to describe the experience. Some attempts at more sophisticated language are evident, though occasional inaccuracies occur.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter uses a mix of simple and some complex sentence structures. However, there are noticeable errors in grammar and punctuation that sometimes affect clarity.

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