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Band 5+: You recently went on a vacation with your family, and you want to write to your friend to share your experience. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter: • Describe where you went and what you did • Mention who was with you • Explain why you enjoyed it

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Dear sahil,

how are you doing ? i hope you find this letter well, i wanna share the experience which i had on vactions with family members. Actually i went to bathinda along with all family members. there we did alot of activities including swimming and climbing on the mountains.

when i was on climbing i met with a person rohit, who was from our city. guess what happen ? you know i just slipped my feet from the mountain and that guy helped me.

Honestly, I enjoyed the trip not only because of the activies but also i got the companion. While i was there he and I did swimming as well and a few days before i went to his house met with family members. he was a nice guy. I hope we will meet all one day together.

Best regards,

Amandeep singh

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
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Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task, providing a good overview of the trip, the people involved, and the reasons for enjoyment. Minor improvements in structure and detail could enhance the response. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and sentence structure. Some transitions between ideas feel abrupt.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate for the context, but a wider range of vocabulary and more precise word choices would enhance the letter's sophistication.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

While the letter conveys the message, there are several grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and fluency. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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