Bar Chart

Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries along with the world average in 2000 and 2015. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image depicts a bar chart showing the percentage of adult male smokers in seven countries and the world average for 2000 and 2015. In 2000, the world average was 45%, decreasing to 35% in 2015. Armenia had 70% in 2000 and 65% in 2015. Egypt showed 55% and 45% for the respective years. Lebanon recorded 60% in 2000 and 55% in 2015. Bangladesh's figures were 65% in 2000, dropping to 60% in 2015. Cuba had 50% in 2000 and 45% in 2015. Mexico reported 40% in 2000 and 35% in 2015. Australia was at 30% in 2000, decreasing to 20% in 2015.

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The bar chart illustrates the percentage of adult smokers around the world with the average in 2000 and 2015. Overall, the World percent of male smoking population decreased.The most smoking countries in 2000 were Armenia, Bangladesh, Cuba. This three countries were on the top of the chart, also on the bottom were Autralia, Egypt, Lebanon.

Top charts of the 2000, Armenia, Bangladesh, Cuba mostly their male population smokes and accounts above 50 perecents.Armenian men smoke a little more than Mexico and Autralia together. Only the top three competitors had more than 50 percents.

After 15 years status of the competitors have changed

most of them stated to smoke less they are Bangladesh from 62-63 to 38-39 percents Armenia from 65 to 52. Bangladesh cutted around 24 points.But the most absolute difference had Mexico and Autralia.They fell roughly 1.5 times. Some countries rose they results Egypt 34 to 43 points and Lebanon 10 points.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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bangladesh: 4

countries: 3

armenia: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to address the task but includes some inaccurate information and irrelevant comparisons. The organization is not very clear, and the language contains errors. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically, and using precise language.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report lacks a clear structure and logical flow. The information is not presented in a coherent manner, making it difficult to follow the main trends and comparisons. Paragraphing is weak, and the connections between sentences and ideas are often unclear. Use cohesive devices more effectively to link ideas and create a smoother flow. Consider organizing the report into clear paragraphs, each focusing on a specific aspect of the data.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is limited and sometimes inaccurate. There are instances of inappropriate word choice and imprecise language. Expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and comparisons. Use more precise language to convey the information accurately. For example, instead of 'Top charts of the 2000,' use a more appropriate phrase like 'In 2000, Armenia, Bangladesh and Cuba recorded the highest percentages'. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and punctuation mistakes. Sentence structure is often awkward and unclear. Focus on improving your understanding of basic grammar rules and sentence construction. Proofread carefully to identify and correct errors. For example, 'This three countries were on the top of the chart, also on the bottom were Autralia, Egypt, Lebanon' should be revised to 'These three countries were at the top of the chart, while Australia, Egypt, and Lebanon were at the bottom.'

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