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Band 8+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. "The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant." Write at least 150 words.

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Image for topic: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. "The graph below shows the number of shops that closed and the number of new shops that opened in one country between 2011 and 2018. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant." Write at least 150 words.

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The image shows shop closures and openings from 2011 to 2018: in 2011 closures were 7,000, openings 8,000; 2012 closures 6,000, openings 6,000; 2013 closures 5,500, openings 7,000; 2014 closures 6,500, openings 5,000; 2015 closures 1,500, openings 4,000; 2016 closures 5,000, openings 4,000; 2017 closures 4,000, openings 4,000; 2018 closures 4,000, openings 3,000.

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The given graph illustrates the trends of shop closures and openings between 2011 and 2018.

Overall, the number of shop closures was generally higher than the number of openings throughout the period, except in 2015. In 2011, there were around 6500 shop closures and approximately 4000 openings. The number of closures dropped significantly in 2015 to about 500, while openings peaked at roughly 6000 in the same year.

In contrast, shop openings were relatively stable from 2011 to 2014, fluctuating between 4000 and 5000. From 2016 onwards, both closures and openings declined, with closures remaining higher than openings except in 2015. By 2018, shop closures had decreased to around 3000 and openings were approximately 2500. The year 2015 was an outlier with a sharp decrease in closures and a spike in openings.

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openings: 9

closures: 8

number: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task, summarizing the main features of the graph. However, there are some inaccuracies in the data reported. For example, the report states that in 2011 there were around 6500 shop closures and approximately 4000 openings, but the visual description indicates 7000 closures and 8000 openings. Also, the report states that openings peaked at roughly 6000 in 2015, but the visual description indicates 4000. To improve, ensure greater accuracy in reporting the data and include more specific details to support the overview. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is well-organized and easy to follow. The information is presented logically with a clear overview, followed by specific details and comparisons. The use of cohesive devices is effective, contributing to the smooth flow of the report. Paragraphing is well-managed, with each paragraph focusing on a distinct aspect of the data. To further enhance coherence, consider using more varied transition words and phrases to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, used accurately and appropriately. Terms like 'fluctuating,' 'declined,' 'outlier,' and 'spike' are effectively used to describe the trends in the graph. To further enhance the lexical resource, consider incorporating more sophisticated vocabulary related to business and economic trends, such as 'contraction,' 'expansion,' or 'equilibrium,' where appropriate. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures used with full flexibility and control. Punctuation and grammar are used correctly and appropriately throughout the report. There are virtually no grammatical errors or phrasing issues, indicating a high level of grammatical competence.

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