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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear Shawn,

I am writing this letter to inquire about the gym membership available with rates and also activites that are available in gym.

I am suffering from diabetes nowadays because of 9-5 office life. My body is not getting enough exercise for burning sugar calories. Therefore, my doctor preferred me to join gym and prescribed me to do cardio activity. I am curious about knowing the membership and rate of each and every membership. Not only that but also, I am very excited to know which types of activities are available in gym. In addition to that, let me know the procedure that I have to follow for joining the gym from upcoming week. Moreover, I will aslo require a good-professional dietery for scheduling my diet plan to reduce my sugar level.

I am looking forward to recieve your reply,

Thank you,

Utsav Limbachiya.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the structure could be improved for clarity and conciseness. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and slightly rambling style affect the overall flow and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but the range could be expanded. More precise and sophisticated language would enhance the letter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

Grammatical errors are frequent and detract from the overall clarity and impact of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed.

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