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Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear sir or madam,

I hope you are doing well. I am deciding to join a gym because i feel like I have gained weight. These days,I have very hectic schedule due to which its always difficult for me to spend some time on exercise but i know exercise is very necessary for any human being. Joining gym will not only help to to keep my body fit but also exercising at gym would be relaxing time for me.

I don’t have much knowledge the different memberships that are available at gyms so that’s can you please le me knwo what types of memeberships are available at your gym and what are the prices of all that memberships?. If you provide me this detail then it would be easy for me to choose the membership.

Moreover, as per my knowledge different gyms have different mahines for exercising so, can you please provide me informatioj about what activities are available at gym?.

At last, i want to say that please let me know about the joining procedure as well. May i need to fill any form or visit the gym first to complete the joining procedure?

Thank you,

Amandeep kaur.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

joining: 3

different: 3

available: 3

please: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and conciseness would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter's structure is generally clear, but the flow could be improved with better paragraphing and smoother transitions between ideas. Grammar errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall lexical resource score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and fluency of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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