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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The table below shows local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia for the years 2004 - 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. You should write at least 150 words

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The image shows a table detailing local catches and imports of fresh fish into Perth, Australia from 2004 to 2014. For 2004, local catches were 2677.7 metric tons, imports were 464.5 metric tons, totaling 3142.2 metric tons. In 2005, local was 3086.2, imports 231.6, total 3178.8. For 2006, local 4374, imports 309.9, total 4683.9. In 2007, local 5702.2, imports 903.5, total 6605.7. 2008 shows local 8136.2, imports 717.8, total 8854. In 2009, local 4601.9, imports 1104.1, total 5706. 2010 local catches were 6813.7, imports 1032.7, total 7846.4. For 2011, local was 8033.1, imports 578.1, total 8611.2. In 2012, local 3101.8, imports 1237.3, total 4339.1. For 2013, local 4739.9, imports 1121.1, total 5861. For 2014, local 5031.9, imports 782.7, total 5814.7.

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The given tabel illustrates local catches and imports of fresh fish into perth Australia from 2004 and 2014. Overall, it is clear that total amount fish catches was the most dominan metric tonest throughout the timeframe, while imorts fresh fish was the least dominant.

On the one hand, in 2004 local fish sarted at 2677.7 metric tons and imports to mertic tons was just 464.5, then local imports was just 464.5 metric tons in the same year. Following that, the figure commenced at 3086.2, but local imports was around 241.0 metri ctons in year 2005, after which by the year 2006 local fish was just 437.4 metric tons, while local imports merly begun at 200.0 metric tons in the same year.

On the other hnad, fresh fish into perth, Australia, commenced at 3142.2 metric tons in the year 2004. Following this, local frsh fish steadily boosted to about 3317.5 metric tons in 2005. Finally, the trend sharply increased to around 5814.7 mertic tons in the last year 2014.

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

local: 7

metric: 7

imports: 5

fresh: 3

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Task Response

The report attempts to describe the data but contains significant inaccuracies and a lack of clear organization. The writing is also difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and unclear phrasing. To improve, focus on accurately representing the data, organizing the information logically (e.g., by trends or comparisons), and using clear and grammatically correct sentences.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates some attempt at organization, but the progression of ideas is not always clear. The structure is present with an overview and body paragraphs, but the connections between sentences and ideas within paragraphs need improvement. Transitions are basic and sometimes used incorrectly ('On the one hand,' 'On the other hand' are not appropriately used). Paragraphing is attempted but could be more effective in grouping related information. To improve, focus on using more varied and accurate transition words and phrases to guide the reader through the information. Ensure each paragraph has a clear focus and that sentences within the paragraph logically connect to that focus.

Lexical Resource

The report uses a limited range of vocabulary, and there are instances of inaccuracies ('dominan metric tonest,' 'imorts,' 'mertic'). There is some attempt to use descriptive language, but it is not always effective or accurate. To improve, expand your vocabulary related to describing trends and quantities. Pay close attention to spelling and word choice to ensure accuracy. Use a dictionary or thesaurus to find more precise and varied language. Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, subject-verb agreement issues, and incorrect word forms ('tabel,' 'amount fish catches was,' 'local fish sarted'). Sentence structure is often simple and repetitive, limiting the complexity of the writing. Punctuation errors are also present. To improve, focus on mastering basic grammar rules and sentence structures. Practice writing more complex sentences using a variety of clauses and phrases. Proofread carefully for errors in grammar, spelling, and punctuation.

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