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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. You are going on a month training programme to the UK and know that the head of the course would like one of the participants to be the social events' organiser. Write a letter to the Training Organiser. In your letter • expressing your interest in the role • requesting more information about it • explaining what experience you have

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dear sir ,

I am writing a this letter regarding the social event that is held in the uk on 15 march . I know about this event from the advertisement on the newspaper and learn about that you would like one volunteer for the organisation of social event.

Furthermore, I am keen interesting in participating as organizer of event. Although,I hold a professional degree certificate in the field of organising event along with that I have a experience in this field. Additionally, I participate as a volunteer for occasion manger in my college event. I done my work very well and also achieved first price for this act .

Moreover, I request to you would you please provide all detail regarding the event so that I aware about the all activities of the event.i hope you will give me a opportunity to work in this event.

I hope you will give me a prompt reply

Your sincerely

Navjot kaur

Word Count: 160

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

event: 6

about: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task of applying to be a social event organiser, but there are several issues. The purpose is stated, but the letter includes irrelevant details (e.g., mentioning an advertisement in a newspaper, which is not in the task). The tone is generally appropriate, but there are inaccuracies (e.g., 'keen interesting' should be 'keen interest', 'I done' should be 'I did'). The request for details about the event is relevant, but the letter lacks a clear structure and some key points are underdeveloped. To improve, focus on the specific requirements: explain why you are suitable for the role, provide relevant experience, and avoid irrelevant information. Use more formal language and check grammar.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter lacks clear paragraphing and logical flow. Ideas are not well-organized, and transitions between sentences are abrupt. Consider using linking words and structuring the letter into clear paragraphs: introduction, body (reasons for interest, experience), and conclusion (request and closing).

Lexical Resource

Vocabulary is limited and often used incorrectly (e.g., 'keen interesting', 'occasion manger', 'first price'). There is repetition and lack of sophistication. Expand your vocabulary and use more precise terms related to event organization. Avoid direct translation from your native language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are frequent grammatical errors (e.g., 'I am writing a this letter', 'I done my work', 'I request to you would you please'). Sentence structures are simple and often incorrect. Work on basic grammar, especially verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. Practice writing more complex sentences accurately.

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