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Band 4+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. A good friend has just changed schools and is having difficulty fitting in and needs your advice. Write a letter to your friend. In your letter • make suggestions as to how they could make friends • suggest joining clubs, participating in school activities • give any extra general advice You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear..., You should write at least 150 words.

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Dear martha

I hope you are doing good and this letter will find you in totally good health, I’ve read your last letter and it was sad to know you’re not happy with your actual situation but don’t worry I’ve passed with the same situation before and I moved on quickly all you should know is that’s a temporary situation,so all you should do is trying to make new friends so you won’t feel alone,make friendships with your classmates by greeting them , discussing with them and sharing ideas with them .

Additionally you can join clubs such as musical clubs ,art clubs ,so you can meet people have the same intersts with you , participate in school activities like volunteering, camping.

Depending on my experience i can tell you that being yourself and being confident is all you need to involve with others .

Finally i wish you can do better as soon as possible and hear good news from you next time .

Nessrine

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, providing relevant suggestions and advice.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's structure and flow could be improved. Some sentences are grammatically incorrect, making it difficult to follow the message.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but some choices are not always precise or natural.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains several grammatical errors, which affect the overall clarity and fluency.

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