Bar Chart

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The bar chart shows the scores of teams A, B and C over four different seasons. Summarize the information by selecting and reporting the main features and make comparisons where relevant. Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a bar graph with scores by team per season from 2002 to 2005. In 2002, Team A scored 5pt, Team B 82pt, Team C 15pt. In 2003, Team A scored 10pt, Team B 60pt, Team C 20pt. In 2004, Team A scored 15pt, Team B 43pt, Team C 12pt. In 2005, Team A scored 8pt, Team B 55pt, Team C 5pt.

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The bar chart illustrates the scores by three teams among four different seasons from 2002 to 2005 periods.

Overall, it can be clearly seen that, team B’ scores had the highest score among the four different seasons, contemporary team A and team C recorded at much lower level, during the periods.

Team B’s scores is observed 82 points, team A (5 point) and team C (10 point) registered at 2002. Team A gradually improvement from 5 points to 11 points in 2003, while team B had 15 point in 2003. Additionally, team C’ scores fluctuated moderately, besides 10 point in 2002, 15 point in 2003, 12 point in 2004 then slightly decline in 2005.

In summary, the chart clearly indicates that, team B’ scores is observed the highest point during the other years. Team A demonstrated noticeable improvement in 2004, while team C has 5 points accounted for 2005 periods.

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Task Response

The report addresses the task and provides some relevant information from the bar chart. However, there are inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., 'team A gradually improvement from 5 points to 11 points in 2003' and 'team B had 15 point in 2003'). The description of trends is also quite general and lacks specific details. To improve, focus on accurately reporting the data and providing more precise descriptions of the trends and comparisons between the teams' scores over the seasons.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report's organization is somewhat unclear, and the flow of information is disrupted by grammatical errors and awkward phrasing. To improve coherence, focus on creating clearer transitions between sentences and paragraphs. Ensure each paragraph has a central idea and that the sentences within it support that idea. Using cohesive devices more effectively will also enhance the readability of your report.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the data. To enhance your lexical resource, try to incorporate a wider range of vocabulary related to trends and comparisons. For example, instead of 'improvement,' consider using 'growth,' 'increase,' or 'rise.' Also, focus on using more precise language to describe the data, such as 'peaked,' 'declined,' or 'remained stable.' Boost vocabulary complexity to elevate the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains numerous grammatical errors that impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and the correct use of articles and prepositions. Pay close attention to verb tenses and ensure they are used consistently throughout the report. Proofreading carefully for these errors will significantly improve the clarity and accuracy of your writing.

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