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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the destinations of holiday makers from a particular Asian country in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph with countries on the x-axis and numerical values on the y-axis ranging up to 1200000; Australia at approximately 700000, Malaysia at 1000000, Korea at 600000, Japan at 800000, Pakistan at 200000, Sri Lanka at 400000, India at 900000.

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The bar chart illustrates 2012 vacation distribution among some nations located in Asia. In the graph, population is plotted against Nations participating in thestudy.

The country of Malaysia had the highest number of one million persons, with India trailing close to it with a total number of individuals slightly below the population of Malaysia.

A peep into the distribution shows Japan with a population of eight hundred thousand people particing within the year under study. Slightly below Japan, the graph recorded holiday activities in Auatralia and Korea with a population distribution of seven hundred thousand and six hundred thousand respectively.

The other two countries, which are Siri Lanka and Pakistan had a lower holiday activities of lessthan 500,000 in that same year.

In conclusion, the holiday activities among these nations is a comparative analysis expressing of the prevailing eonomic status and financial capacity of a country,s populase.

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population: 4

distribution: 3

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thousand: 3

holiday: 3

activities: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the bar graph and making relevant comparisons. The organization is clear, with a logical progression of information. However, there are some minor inaccuracies in the data reported and some awkward phrasing. To improve, ensure data accuracy by double-checking the values on the graph and vary sentence structure for better readability. The report falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report generally presents a clear overview of the data, but the organization could be improved. Consider grouping countries more logically based on their holidaymaker numbers (e.g., high, medium, low). The conclusion is a bit vague and could be more directly tied to the data presented. For example, you could mention the range of holidaymaker numbers or reiterate the most and least popular destinations.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate but could be more varied and precise. For instance, instead of repeatedly using 'population,' consider alternatives like 'number of tourists,' 'holidaymakers,' or 'visitors.' Also, try to incorporate more specific vocabulary related to travel and tourism.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement, correct article usage (e.g., 'the study'), and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors. For example, 'persons' should be 'people', and 'Auatralia' should be 'Australia'.

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