Bar Chart

Band 5+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the destinations of holiday makers from a particular Asian country in 2012. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant. » You should write at least 150 words.

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The image shows a bar graph with countries on the x-axis and numerical values on the y-axis ranging up to 1200000; Australia at approximately 700000, Malaysia at 1000000, Korea at 600000, Japan at 800000, Pakistan at 200000, Sri Lanka at 400000, India at 900000.

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The above graph illustrates people going on vacation from mostly Asia in the year 2012. though Australia is not a country in Asia, but it was mentioned above. It shows that holiday migrants from different countries in Asia ranged from about 200000 to 1000000. There are seven nations mentioned in this illustration; Australia, Malaysia, Korea, Japan, Pakistan, Sri Lanka, and India. It was not stated, but there is prrobably people from other nations on voyage.

Pakistan had the lowest number of people as shown; not exactly stated but their range is a little above 200000, followed by Sri Lanka is numbered something tiny bit above 400000; Koreans took the fifth place with 600000 people on the go; Australia came fourthe with about 700000.

I was surprised to see Japan, India and Malaysia in the top three with the highest numbers. Japan third with 800000, Indians came the second runner up with about about 50000 and Malaysia highest with a total of 1000000.

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australia: 3

malaysia: 3

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Task Response

The report addresses the task by summarizing the main features of the graph and making some comparisons. However, there are inaccuracies in the data reported (e.g., India's figure). To improve, ensure accurate data representation and avoid informal language. Also, organize the information more logically, perhaps by grouping countries based on the number of holidaymakers.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report demonstrates an attempt to organize the information, but the flow is somewhat disjointed. The introduction is present, but the subsequent paragraphs lack clear topic sentences and transitions. Consider using more cohesive devices to link ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, using phrases like 'In contrast' or 'Similarly' can help to draw comparisons more explicitly. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a specific aspect of the data to improve coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is relatively basic and lacks the precision needed to effectively describe the data. There are instances of vague language, such as 'something tiny bit above 400000'. To improve, try to incorporate more specific and varied vocabulary related to numerical data and comparisons. For example, instead of 'people on the go,' you could use 'tourists' or 'travelers'. Also, avoid informal language to maintain a formal tone.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. There are issues with sentence structure, verb tense consistency, and subject-verb agreement. For example, the phrase 'Indians came the second runner up' is grammatically incorrect. To improve, focus on using a variety of sentence structures accurately and proofread carefully to catch errors in grammar and punctuation. Pay attention to using correct prepositions and articles.

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