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Band 6+: You should spend about 20 minutes on this task. The graph below shows the average monthly change in the prices of three metals during 2014. Summarise the information by selecting and reporting the main features, and make comparisons where relevant.Write at least 150 words.

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The image displays a line graph titled "Average monthly change in prices of copper, nickel and zinc (2014)" with a y-axis representing "% change in price compared with previous month" and an x-axis for months. For Copper, the monthly percentage changes were: January 2%, February 1%, March 0.5%, April 0.5%, May -0.5%, June 1%, July 1%, August 1%, September -1%, October 0.5%, November 0%, and December 1%. For Nickel, the values were: January 6%, February 4%, March 1%, April 1%, May -1%, June -3%, July -1%, August -1%, September -1%, October -2%, November 1%, and December 1.5%. For Zinc, the data points were: January 1%, February 3%, March 2%, April 1.5%, May 1%, June -0.5%, July -0.5%, August -0.5%, September -0.5%, October 0%, November 2%, and December 1.5%.

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The line graph illustrates the average monthly change in prices of copper, nickel and zinc in 2014. Overall, it shows significant changes throughout the year.

It is seen that copper is one of the most stable of the three metals. Between January and March was slight decline that came back on March. In July, it grew to 1 percent, which remained up to September, then fell by half a percent in October and rose to 1.5 in December.

Nickel remained unsteady all year. The highest point in January, 6 percent, dropped considerably by March to 1 percent, with a slight dip in May. Moreover, a dramatic decrease happened in June, with the lowest point during 2014 at -3 percent. Prices gradually climbed to -1 in July and marginally fell again in October. Unexpectedly, the percentage increased sharply in November to 1, remaining the same in December.

Zinc happened to undergo a considerable spike in February that reduced modestly by June. Between July and October, the cost was pretty constant, between -1 and -0.5. The same as in the price of Nickel, it is seen unexpected surge in November of one percent but compared to Nickel, Zinc managed to climb to 2 percent, being the most expensive metal out of the three.

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

percent: 7

nickel: 3

between: 3

march: 3

october: 3

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Task Response

The report adequately covers the main features of the graph, including overall trends and key fluctuations for each metal. It makes some comparisons, such as noting zinc's peak in February and its relative stability, and mentions nickel's volatility. However, there are a few inaccuracies and omissions: the description of copper's trend is somewhat unclear (e.g., 'came back on March' and the rise to 1.5% in December is not supported by the data), and zinc's November surge is described as 2% when the data shows 2% for November, but the comparison with nickel is slightly confusing. The report would benefit from clearer data referencing and a more precise summary of the overall patterns, such as noting that nickel had the highest and lowest points, and that zinc was generally more stable than nickel. Overall, the response is relevant and sufficiently detailed, but minor lapses in accuracy and clarity prevent a higher score.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report has a clear overall structure with an introduction and separate paragraphs for each metal, which helps the reader follow the description. However, the flow is sometimes disrupted by awkward phrasing and unclear references (e.g., 'that came back on March', 'the same as in the price of Nickel'). The use of cohesive devices is limited and sometimes inaccurate, making the text less smooth. To improve, use a wider range of linking words and ensure each paragraph has a clear topic sentence and logical progression of ideas.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate for the task, with some good attempts at variation (e.g., 'dramatic decrease', 'considerable spike', 'unexpected surge'). However, there are instances of imprecise word choice and awkward collocations (e.g., 'came back on March', 'the cost was pretty constant', 'being the most expensive metal'). To achieve a higher score, aim for more precise and natural vocabulary, and avoid informal or vague terms. Use a wider range of synonyms and more sophisticated expressions to describe trends and comparisons.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a reasonable range of sentence structures, including some complex sentences. However, there are several grammatical errors and awkward phrasings that affect clarity (e.g., 'Between January and March was slight decline', 'it is seen unexpected surge in November'). Punctuation is mostly correct, but some sentences are run-ons or lack proper connectors. To improve, focus on subject-verb agreement, article usage, and sentence structure. Reviewing grammar rules and practicing writing more complex sentences accurately will help enhance grammatical range and accuracy.

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