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Band 6+: You should write at least 150 words. The chart shows male and female graduates from the Higher Colleges of Technology colleges in the UAE Write a report for a university lecturer describing the information below. You should spend about 20 minutes on this task.

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The image shows a bar graph titled "HCT Graduates by College," with the x-axis displaying the names of seven colleges and the y-axis indicating the number of graduates in increments of 100 up to 600. Al Ain Men's has 131 graduates, Al Ain Women's 218, Abu Dhabi Men's 273, Abu Dhabi Women's 293, Dubai Men's 426, Dubai Women's 547, Ras Al Khaimah Men's 102, Ras Al Khaimah Women's 178, Sharjah Men's 165, and Sharjah Women's 186.

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The bar chart illustrates the number of men and women graduates from Higher College of technology colleges in the UAE.

Overall, the highest number of graduates were women from Dubai. The lowest were men from Ras Al Khaimah.

The comparison of Al Ain men and women is as follows, there was 218 female grduates versus the 131 male grduates. The difference in numbers between male and female grduates from Abu Dhabi was actually closest in number among all other cities being compared. Men being 273 and women being 293.

Dubai men and women had a significantly large difference as there was 547 female graduates but only 426 male graduates. The next two cities had the lowest number of graduates in both male and female categories. There was 102 male graduates from Ras Al Khaimah and 178 female graduates. Meanwhile, in Sharjah there was 165 male graduates and 186 female graduates.

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graduates: 9

female: 6

women: 5

number: 4

there: 4

grduates: 3

being: 3

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The report covers the main points of the graph and provides a reasonable overview of the data. However, there is room for improvement in terms of organization and detail. To improve, consider structuring the report with a clearer introduction, body paragraphs focusing on specific trends or comparisons, and a concise conclusion. Also, aim for more precise language and avoid informal expressions.

Coherence & Cohesion

The report is generally well-organized with a clear introduction, overview, and detailed paragraphs. However, cohesion could be improved by using more varied linking words and phrases to connect ideas within and between paragraphs. For example, in the third paragraph, starting with "The comparison of Al Ain men and women is as follows..." is a bit clunky. Consider rephrasing for smoother flow. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single, clear aspect of the data to enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The report demonstrates a sufficient range of vocabulary to describe the data. However, there's room for improvement by using more precise and sophisticated language. For instance, instead of saying "the difference in numbers between male and female graduates from Abu Dhabi was actually closest in number," you could use a more concise and impactful phrase like "Abu Dhabi showed the smallest gender gap in graduate numbers." Aim for more variety in your word choices to elevate the lexical resource. Pay attention to vocabulary repetition to improve the overall score.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The report demonstrates a good command of grammar, with only minor errors. Pay close attention to subject-verb agreement and correct use of articles. For example, "there was 218 female grduates versus the 131 male grduates" should be "there were 218 female graduates versus 131 male graduates." Proofread carefully to eliminate these small errors and enhance the overall grammatical accuracy.

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