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Band 4+: You signed up for a language course but now you have to cancel your enrolment due to unforeseen circumstances. Write a letter to the course administrator apologizing for canceling. You should include: - explain your reason for canceling the course - express your regret for any inconvenience caused - ask if a refund is possible.

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To whom it may concern,

I hope you are doing well.

I am wiriting this letter to request to Inform you of withdrawing my language class you are supposed to be in charge of. I signed up the class a week ago, however, unfortunately I cannot attend the class due to move to the other city by a company I am working.

I really apologize this short notice becase the class starts next Monday. I cannot do tell you this earlier as the decision of move made yestersay.

When it comes to tuition fee, if it is possible, I would like to fully refund in the same method I paid for. I belieive the addmision fee can be refundable with this situation. Could you confirm whether I can get full refund? I will be looking forward to your reply.

For the reference, below is my information

Name: Taedong JungCourse : A classSincerly,Taedong Jung

Word Count: 153

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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class: 4

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses all the requirements of the task, including the reason for withdrawal, apology for late notice, and inquiry about the course fee. The content is relevant and generally well-organized. To improve, focus on refining grammatical accuracy and sentence structure for enhanced clarity. For example, clarify the sentence 'I am wiriting this letter to request to Inform you of withdrawing my language class you are supposed to be in charge of.' and ensure consistent use of formal language throughout the letter.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but the flow of ideas could be improved. Consider using more explicit transition words and phrases to connect your ideas and ensure a smoother reading experience. For example, in the second paragraph, you could use a phrase like 'The reason for this late notice is...' to better link the apology with the explanation. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is generally adequate for conveying the message, but there's room for improvement in terms of precision and variety. Try to incorporate more specific and sophisticated language to express your ideas more effectively. For instance, instead of saying 'move to the other city,' you could say 'relocation to another city.' Also, be careful with spelling ('addmision' should be 'admission').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to verb tense consistency, correct article usage, and sentence structure. For example, 'I am wiriting this letter to request to Inform you of withdrawing my language class you are supposed to be in charge of' is grammatically awkward and unclear. It could be revised to 'I am writing to inform you of my withdrawal from the language class.' Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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