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Band 7+: You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

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Dear Mr. Oko

I hope this letter finds you well. I am writing to humbly request for a change in my posting as I have been assigned to take charge of the accident and emergency side laboratory for the past two years since I was employed in this establishment.

Being that I have now gained mastery in the handling of emergency cases, and also become resilient and steadfast because of the nature of urgency of work in my current place of posting on a daily basis, I must express my thankfulness. However, for my professional improvement, I need to be versatile in my field; hence my appeal for a transfer to the main laboratory department. There are lots of sophisticated laboratory automatic analyzers in that section which I need to get acquainted with for my career growth.

Moreover, moving me to that section will mean additional manpower, which Will, in turn, improve the turnaround time of the division. Furthermore, I enjoy the mentorship this establishment offers, and the renumeration is better than other hospitals. So I really wish to continue working here while I also grow in cadre and expertise.

I am looking forward to your positive reply at your earliest convenience. Thanks.

Your sincerely.

Sandra

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Overall Band Score

7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

8

The letter effectively addresses all aspects of the task, providing clear reasons for the transfer request and highlighting the benefits for both the individual and the company.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-structured and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the paragraphs are appropriately organized.

Lexical Resource

7

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, with some instances of slightly less formal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

7

The letter contains a few minor grammatical errors, but these do not significantly hinder comprehension.

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