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Band 4+: You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

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Dear saman,

I am writing to this letter for transfer me to a new unit.

Firstly of off, I have been waiting in two years. Therefore that works I have lot of experience.So now I would like to change another department.Now I am doing documentation work.

This not give best experience and not give any promotion.So I am totally change fixed deposit and savings units. That time I can get new promotion and some benefits that role.

Otherwise I can do that jobs very instantly. That time I am intruders new customer and fixed deposit I can get bonus for next month.

I think that job is very help for my future. Please kindly take my requesting and give this opportunity for me.

I am waiting for you mail

Your faithfully

M.Dasinthan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

4.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks clarity and organization. The reasons for wanting a transfer are not fully explained, and the benefits to the company are not clearly articulated. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The ideas are not logically connected, and the flow of the letter is disrupted.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is basic and repetitive. There are some errors in word choice and collocations.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect tenses, articles, and prepositions. These errors significantly impact the clarity and readability of the letter.

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