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Band 4+: You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

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Dear sir / madam

I hope this letter finds you well.I am writing to request a transfer from my current department.

I have been working as an upper primary department mathematics teacher since 2022.As a primary teacher,I have gained numerous skills and abilities.such as problems solving, Child psychology,assess the child and effective teaching methodologies.These all facts build me as a well- qualified teacher.

Futhermore,I have recently completed post graduate in education in UCG approved university.in spite of my current qualification,I would like to work as secondary department mathematics teacher.I have deep subject knowledge and understanding about the secondary level education.in addition to this from my experience I could be able to maintain good relationship between students and their parents.

Lastly.I enjoy the mentorship this establishment offers and the renumeration better than other school.so I really wish to continue working here while I also grow in my career path.

I look forward to hearing from you soon and welcome Futher discussion regarding this matter.

Your sincerely

Shahila

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Overall Band Score

4.5
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Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

5.5
The letter adequately addresses the task, but it could be more focused on the company's benefits and the reasons for staying. The letter could also be more specific about the desired department and the skills relevant to that department.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5
The letter lacks a clear structure and flow. The paragraphs are not well-organized, and the transitions between ideas are not smooth. The numerous grammatical errors further hinder the coherence and cohesion.

Lexical Resource

5
The letter uses a range of vocabulary, but some words are not used accurately or appropriately. The vocabulary is not particularly sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3
The letter contains numerous grammatical errors, including incorrect punctuation, verb tenses, and article usage. These errors significantly affect the clarity and readability of the letter.

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