🔥 Today Only: Save 30% on Premium — Offer Ends Soon! - Upgrade Now!

Letter

Band 8+: You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

See all user-written answers on this topic

Skyrocket your IELTS band score by 1-2 points in under a month with our premium plan!

Check it out

Note: Both the topic and the answer were created by one of our users.

Dear Mr. Brown,

I am writing to discuss my current position within our company. I feel strongly that I need to change my department due to a variety of reasons. I believe I have acquired all the necessary knowledge and skills in my current field of expertise, but I am eager to challenge myself and develop my skills in marketing.

Firstly, I believe that my personal characteristics, along with my professional skills, make me a strong candidate for this transition. In my current role, I have been managing customer complaints for several years. Furthermore, I was nominated for the Best Employee award for handling the most challenging customer cases, which I finally received last year after being recognized for my efforts since March 2020.

Secondly, transferring within the company would provide corporate benefits, as it would eliminate the need to pay extra for hiring a new employee. Additionally, I am already familiar with the company culture, unlike new hires who require time to adjust. I understand that this transition could save both time and budget for the company. Moreover, I am known for my dedication to my work and have consistently stayed late when needed, which can sometimes be a challenge for fresh recruits.

Word Count: 204

Check Your Answer On This Topic?

Check My Answer

Generate A Band-9 Sample Answer?

Generate A Sample

Overall Band Score

8

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

company: 4

current: 3

skills: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

7

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, a more detailed explanation of the desired department and how the candidate's skills would benefit that department would strengthen the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

8

The letter is well-organized and easy to follow. The ideas flow logically, and the transitions between paragraphs are smooth.

Lexical Resource

7

The vocabulary is appropriate and accurate. A wider range of more sophisticated vocabulary could enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

9

The grammar is accurate and error-free. A wide range of grammatical structures is used effectively.

Answers On The Same Topic:

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Sir or Madam, I am thankful for completing two successful years as Continuous Improvement Engineer at ABC brands. While this was a great learning experience, I believe I would be able to contribute efficiently and effectively as Automation Engineer in the Engineering department of the company. To start with, I would like to appreciate […]

Band 8+

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Mr. Ali, I am writing this letter to request your permission to apply for a new job vacancy in the Machine learning team in our company. Throughout the last two years, I have been working as a software developer in the development team. During this period, a lot of experience was gained, including problem […]

Band 8+

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Mr Perera, As you may know, I’ve been very happy during my time at Simplebooks and I can feel that I have a lot more to learn from the processes in the company. I have learned how to sell, communicate and address the customers needs from my current sales position. I believe I have […]

Band 7+

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Mr. Turner, I am writing to express my interest in transferring to another department, as I believe this change will support both my career development and the company’s growth. During the past two years as a Customer Service Representative, I have gained strong communication skills, learned to resolve client concerns effectively, and developed valuable […]

Band 9

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company

Dear Mr. Brown I am writing to inform you that I have been working at your company for two years as a employer. Now, I am development to move a different department at the same origination. At the moment, I learn many different work such as, I do more work on computer , how to […]

Band 4+

See All

Other Topics:

You started in your present job two years ago. You now feel it is important for your career development to move to a different department in the same company. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter, say what you have learned in your present job suggest how the company would benefit from moving you to a different department explain why you do not wish to leave the company Write at least 150 words. You do NOT need to write any addresses. Begin your letter as follows: Dear .......................,

Dear Mr. Usman, As you know, yesterday marked two years of my tenure as a deputy manager – financial planning in our company and keeping my career growth in mind, I would like to request you for a departmental rotation. The role really helped me broaden my financial acumen where I learned how to analyze […]

Band 8+

During a recent plane journey, you sat next to a businessman who owns a chain of restaurants. You talked to him and he suggested that you should contact him about a possible job in one of his restaurants. Write a letter to this businessman. In your letter remind him when and where you met tell him what kind of job you are interested in say why you think you would be suitable for the job Begin as follows: Dear ... ,

Dear Mr. Smith, I am writing with reference to the potential job opportunity we discussed during our flight SU1618 on September 1st. I would like to formally express my strong interest in the Tech Business Analyst position for back-office automation at your company. With a robust background in the banking sector and extensive hands-on experience […]

Band 9

You want to rent out a small apartment to a family, and you have decided to advertise it. Write a letter to the editor of a local newspaper asking to advertise your ad on the front page of the newspaper. In your letter, 1. give details of the ad that you want to publish 2. mention that you want the ad to be published on the front page say 3. how you would like to pay for the advertisement Begin your letter as follows: Dear Sir or Madam,

Dear Sir or Madam, I am writing to kindly request to publish the advertisement of a small apartment to rent out to a family on the front page of your newspaper. I am planning to rent out from first day of the next month as I will be moving abroad. The apartment that I am […]

Band 6+

You recently bought a piece of equipment for your kitchen but it did not work. You phoned the shop but no action was taken. Write a letter to the shop manager. In your letter x describe the problem with the equipment x explain what happened when you phoned the shop x say what you would like the manager to do

Hello madam, I hope this message finds you well. I am sending this message regarding a defective product. I recently bought a refrigerator from your shop, but it’s cooling power wasn’t as high as claimed. When I contacted the shop through the phone, and i addressed the problem, the cashier denied the refund and even […]

Band 7+

A friend told you recently he/she has gone gone to an excellent restaurant. You wonder if this restaurant will suitable for your birthday party next week. Write a letter to your friend Tell your friend your planned party Ask what kind of food it serve and if your friend has any particular recommendations from the menu

Dear Pat, Good day my precious friend.I am writing to tell you about my plans for my upcoming birthday next week . Last month ,when we met at the wedding anniversary celebration of your parents, you told me that you had a memorable experience in one of the next restaurant to the nearby Trevor City. […]

Band 6+

You were supposed to attend a friend's birthday party last weekend, but you didn't show up without any notice. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for your absence. You should include details about: - why you couldn't attend the party - why you didn't inform them beforehand - how you plan to make it up to them.

Dear Reena I am writing to apologise for arrivng late in your birthday party. I was over the moon on 6th October, afterall it was my bestie birthday. You will be surprised to know that I told all my colleagues about your birthday bash and Sushant as you know, your secret admirer, was insisting to […]

Band 5+

See All