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Band 5+: You want to join a local sports club to improve your fitness and meet new people. Write a letter to the club secretary. You should include: - why you want to join the club - what sports you are interested in - any relevant experience you have

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Dear sir or madam,I am writing this beacause I would like to join the sports club in out town.

Firstly, I would like to mentioned that since childhood my favorite sport is cricket. Moreover, football is also one of my favorite. Unfortunately, when I was kid my parents did not allow me to join the sports club because, they wanted me to focus only on study.

Furthermore, I have a moderate level skills for cricket and football because I play with my friends and some knowdelge I gather from watching professional players on tv in different games like domestic, international etc.

The main key thing to join the club is I want to master my skills and sports are a good option to stay fit and healthy.

Yours faithfully,

Neel

Word Count: 130

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Overall Band Score

5.5
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
sports: 3
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, clearly stating the sports of interest, the writer's ability level, and the reasons for wanting to join the club. There are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing, but overall the letter is well-written and easy to understand. To improve, focus on using more natural and varied language, and proofread carefully for errors in grammar and spelling. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

5
The letter is generally coherent, but the organization could be improved for better flow. Consider dedicating a paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task instructions (sports interests, ability level, and reasons for joining). Using clearer topic sentences at the beginning of each paragraph would also enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

5
The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more specific and varied vocabulary related to sports and your abilities. For example, instead of 'moderate level skills,' you could describe specific skills or experiences. Also, avoid using informal language.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
The letter contains several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay close attention to spelling ('beacause,' 'knowdelge'), punctuation (missing commas, incorrect use of 'because'), and sentence structure (run-on sentences, awkward phrasing). Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize these errors. Also, ensure subject-verb agreement and correct tense usage.

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