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Band 6+: You want to join a local sports club to improve your fitness and meet new people. Write a letter to the club secretary. You should include: - why you want to join the club - what sports you are interested in - any relevant experience you have

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter with regards to the application of sports club membership.

My primary intension is to get socialize with people as well as to keep my physical fitness. I wish to be more active and develop a mentally and physically balanced body.

I came to know about the club from my friend, he is premium member of the club from last three years. He is encouraging me to be a part of the sports club because he knows my talent in badminton as well as swimming.

I am very fond of badminton from childhood onwards, I got opportunities to participate in many competitions school level and college level. Once I was state champion in badminton from college. All these memories motivating me to be a part of sports club. In between I had a break in my sports activities due to some health problems. Now it is the right time to start again.

Hope to hear a positive response from you.

Yours faithfully,

Nadusha Anthru

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B1 - Intermediate
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Vocabulary Repetition:

sports: 4

badminton: 3

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Task Response

The letter appropriately addresses all requirements of the task, providing clear reasons for wanting to join the sports club, explaining how you learned about it, and describing your sports interests. The content is relevant and sufficiently detailed. To further improve, consider adding more specific details about the activities you're interested in and elaborating on how the club's facilities align with your fitness goals.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally organized, but some sentences could be linked more smoothly to improve the flow. Consider using a wider range of cohesive devices to connect ideas between sentences and paragraphs. For example, you could use transition words or phrases to indicate cause and effect, contrast, or addition.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room to enhance it with more specific and varied word choices. For instance, instead of 'get socialize,' you could use 'engage in social activities' or 'expand my social network.' Similarly, consider using more descriptive language when discussing your sports interests and achievements.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that occasionally impede understanding. Focus on improving sentence structure, subject-verb agreement, and correct use of tenses. For example, 'My primary intension is to get socialize' should be 'My primary intention is to socialize.' Review basic grammar rules and practice writing to improve accuracy.

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