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Band 5+: You want to join a local sports club to improve your fitness and meet new people. Write a letter to the club secretary. You should include: - why you want to join the club - what sports you are interested in - any relevant experience you have

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Dear Madam ,

I am writing you this letter to inform you that I want to join a local sports club, but i need more information before I apply.

Firstly I want to say that I want to join this club because of my capacities in sports is very good but I still want to improve more and stay in good health. I love doing sport since I was young and I find that your club has inspire me to apply there as it has all facilities to be train well.

I need some specific information like my schedule, the fees, the facilities I will get and who will be my coach and if there will be competitions required.

Yours faithfully,

Aera

Word Count: 122

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including the reasons for wanting to join, specific information needed, and a mention of experience level. However, the letter could benefit from more specific details to enhance clarity and relevance. For example, elaborating on the 'capacities in sports' and providing more detail about the facilities that inspire you would strengthen the response. Also, mentioning the specific sport and your current level of experience in it would make the letter more targeted and effective. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally understandable, but the organization could be improved. Consider dedicating a separate paragraph to each of the points mentioned in the task instructions (reason for joining, specific information needed, and experience level). Using clearer transitions between ideas would also enhance the flow.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement. Try to use more varied and precise language to express your ideas. For example, instead of 'capacities in sports is very good,' you could say 'I have a strong aptitude for sports' or 'I am proficient in several sports.' Also, avoid repeating phrases like 'I want to join' too frequently.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains grammatical errors that affect clarity. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement ('capacities in sports is very good' should be 'capacities in sports are very good'), correct use of articles (e.g., 'the schedule,' 'the fees'), and sentence structure. Review basic grammar rules and proofread carefully to minimize these errors.

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