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Band 7+: You want to join a new gym in your neighbourhood. Write a letter to the gym manager. In your letter ask what types of membership are available, and what the prices are ask what activities are available ask what the joining procedure is

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Dear manager,

I am writing this letter as I am planning to join the gym, and would love you gather some necessary information before I enroll.

First, I am uncertain which membership will suit my needs. Can you please send me a list of memberships, including pricing for each? I would like to compare them all before I make any decision.

As for activities, are there any swimming coaching feasible at your gym as it is my childhood dream to learn to swim. I would like you to send me a list of all activities available at your location.

Finally, If I would like to purchase a membership, what are the proceeding steps for joining? Is there any free trial policy for new members? Please let me know about a suitable timing so that I can make a visit to have a look.

Looking forward to a reply!

Yours faithfully,

[your name]

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7.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by asking about the types of membership, prices, available activities, and the joining procedure. However, the request for a list of activities is not as specific as it could be. It would be better to ask for details about swimming coaching specifically. Additionally, the letter could be more formal in tone, considering it is addressed to the gym manager.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent and cohesive, with ideas logically organized into three distinct paragraphs. However, there is room for improvement in the transition between the paragraphs to enhance the overall flow of the letter. Additionally, the conclusion could be more formal and polite.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is varied and generally accurate. There is a good range of vocabulary, and the language used is appropriate for the context. However, some minor improvements in word choice and formality could further enhance the lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter demonstrates a wide range of grammatical structures with mostly accurate and appropriate use of punctuation and grammar. However, there are a few minor errors in punctuation and sentence structure that could be improved for a higher score.

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