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Band 5+: You want to sell your television. you think a friend of your might like to buy in from you. Write this letter to your friend. Why you are selling the television? Describe the television Suggest a date when your friend can come and see it.

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Dear Hellen,

I am writing with regard to inform you that as you told me when you had come to my house about my telling that you like it, but you have no sufficient amount for buying new TV, before couple of months.

I would like to sell this television as a consequence that I have to migrate from Kolkata to the Gujarat due to my company give me promotion to transferring me in Gujarat.I do not want to miss the opportunity.I also want to share my dining table.The television has length of 42 inch.as you know I bought this TV for about six months ago I got subscription of Zee cinema as well as Bluetooth Headphones with good quality.This mean that I would like to give both free with TV as I bought this television in 42 thousands rupees.like to give in half price. I request you that you would come to my house in your leisure period if your friend also would like to buy buthas no feasible amount to buy, than you also would ask him or her about my television.

I hope you would consider my words and respond to me in a timely manner.

Warm wishes,

Khush Patel

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Overall Band Score

5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
A2 - Upper Beginner
Consider using more varied and advanced words.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

would: 6

about: 3

television: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task, but the structure and clarity could be improved.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter is difficult to follow due to grammatical errors and unclear sentence structure. The flow of ideas is not smooth.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary is generally appropriate, but there are some instances of awkward phrasing and repetition.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

4

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that significantly impact the clarity and readability.

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