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Band 6+: You want to take a course that is offered by the local community center. Write a letter to the course coordinator to apply for the course. You should include details about: - which course you are applying for - why you want to take the course - any relevant experience you have.

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Good Morning,

My name is Amanda from Huddersfield Senior High School. I am interested to your offer at my school about your English Course. I would like to take the IELTS Preparation course due to my plan to study abroad next year. I believe that by taking this course, it can be assisted to enhance my English skills such as listening, writing, speaking, and reading. Prior to this, i have been taken an english course for a year. But, the goal is only for daily speaking. Following that, i worked as english teacher for elementary children every weekend for a year. However, it is unsufficient to academic requirement. Therefore, i decided to join your course. I hope to be accepted and attended the course as soon as possible. Thank you for your attention.

Sincerely,

Amanda

Word Count: 135

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Overall Band Score

6
(+/- 0.5)
Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.
Grammar Mistakes: N/A
Vocabulary Repetition:
course: 6
english: 4
Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

6
The letter addresses all the requirements of the task, including the course being applied for, the reasons for taking it, and relevant experience. However, there are some minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasing that could be improved. For example, "interested to your offer" could be "interested in your offer," and "it can be assisted" could be "it can assist." Also, the letter could benefit from a slightly more formal tone and a clearer structure with more distinct paragraphs. Overall, the letter is well-written and conveys the necessary information, but attention to detail in grammar and style would elevate it further. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

6
The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Consider using linking words and phrases to connect your sentences and paragraphs more smoothly. For example, you could use 'Furthermore' or 'In addition' to introduce additional reasons for wanting to take the course. Also, ensure each paragraph focuses on a single main point to enhance clarity.

Lexical Resource

6
The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there's room for improvement in using more precise and varied language. For instance, instead of 'assisted to enhance,' you could use 'significantly improve.' Try to incorporate synonyms and more sophisticated vocabulary where appropriate to demonstrate a wider range.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5
There are several grammatical errors that affect the clarity of the letter. For example, 'I am interested to your offer' should be 'I am interested in your offer.' Also, 'i have been taken' should be 'I have taken.' Pay close attention to prepositions, verb tenses, and subject-verb agreement. Proofreading carefully before submitting can help catch these errors.

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