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Band 5+: You want to volunteer at a local community event. Write a letter to the event organizers. - Introduce yourself and explain your interest in volunteering - Describe any relevant skills or experience you have - Ask about available volunteer positions and how to apply

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Dear sir,

I am writing this to share a new ideas to help our local community. I have noticed many students are on school break. I would love to create a gathering to help student learn and play. I believe we can use this free time that many kids has effectively. I have experience doing volunteer at remote area a few years ago. I did many activities, learn new games and teach them new languages. It was fun and benefit to each kids to develop new skill outside classroom. I want to propose this activity to an organization broad. Or else, I am also open for any upcoming volunteer that I could put my hand on to help. I am looking forward to hear from you.

Regards,

Warissara

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
Using more sophisticated words could be beneficial.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:
No noticeable repetition! Great job!

Task Response

The letter addresses the task requirements but includes some irrelevant information and lacks clarity in certain areas. The writer explains the type of volunteer work they'd like to do and mentions relevant experience. However, the letter could be improved by providing more specific details about the skills and experience, and by directly asking about upcoming volunteer opportunities in a clearer manner. The tone is generally appropriate, but the organization and focus could be enhanced for a higher score. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's organization is somewhat clear, but could be improved with more explicit transitions between ideas. For example, when transitioning from your experience to your proposed activity, a clearer link would enhance the flow. Consider using transitional phrases to guide the reader more effectively.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is generally adequate for the task, but there are instances where more precise word choices could enhance the impact. For example, instead of 'put my hand on to help,' consider 'contribute to' or 'participate in.' Expanding your range of vocabulary would make the letter more compelling.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors that affect clarity. For example, 'a new ideas' should be 'new ideas,' and 'many kids has' should be 'many kids have.' Focus on subject-verb agreement and correct article usage. Reviewing basic grammar rules and proofreading carefully will help improve accuracy.

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Band 5+: You want to volunteer at a local community event. Write a letter to the event organizers. - Introduce yourself and explain your interest in volunteering - Describe any relevant skills or experience you have - Ask about available volunteer positions and how to apply

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You want to volunteer at a local community event. Write a letter to the event organizers. – Introduce yourself and explain your interest in volunteering – Describe any relevant skills or experience you have – Ask about available volunteer positions and how to apply

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