Band 4+: You were supposed to attend a friend's birthday party last weekend, but you didn't show up without any notice. Write a letter to your friend apologizing for your absence. You should include details about: - why you couldn't attend the party - why you didn't inform them beforehand - how you plan to make it up to them.

The letter addresses the main requirements of the task: it explains the reason for not attending (daughter's injury), why you couldn't inform earlier (panic and stress), and how you plan to make it up (sending a gift). However, there are several issues that prevent it from achieving a higher score. The tone is somewhat informal and the letter contains multiple spelling and grammatical errors (e.g., 'doughter', 'hend', 'traumatologist', 'rengenology', 'enable to lew you know', 'tap thise message') which affect clarity. Additionally, the explanation for not informing earlier could be more detailed and the plan to make amends is limited to sending a gift, which may not fully address the personal nature of the event. To improve, ensure correct spelling and grammar, use a more formal and apologetic tone, and consider offering a more personal gesture, such as meeting up to celebrate together later. The letter falls short of the required 150 words.

The letter attempts to follow a logical sequence, but the flow is disrupted by unclear phrasing and abrupt transitions. The message is understandable but requires effort to follow. To improve, use clearer paragraphing: one paragraph for the reason, one for why you couldn't inform earlier, and one for making it up. Use linking words like 'because', 'so', 'however', and 'in addition' to connect ideas smoothly.

The vocabulary is basic and contains several errors (e.g., 'doughter' for 'daughter', 'hend' for 'hand', 'rengenology' for 'X-ray', 'restourantat' for 'restaurant'). There is an attempt to use some appropriate words like 'traumatologist' and 'procedures', but overall range is limited. To improve, learn and practice common medical and event-related vocabulary, and use a dictionary to check spelling. Consider using more natural expressions like 'I was unable to attend' instead of 'I enable to lew you know'.

The letter contains frequent grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses ('I really looking forward' should be 'I was really looking forward'), subject-verb agreement ('This situation make' should be 'This situation made'), and missing articles. Punctuation is inconsistent. To improve, review basic grammar rules, especially past tense and sentence structure. Practice writing simple, correct sentences before attempting complex ones. Use a grammar checker or ask for feedback on drafts.