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Band 4+: You work for a company. You have seen some information online about a training course that would be useful for your work. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter ● give details of the course ● say how the course would be useful ● explain how the company could help you do this course.

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Dear Sir/Madam,

I am writing this letter . first of all, I apologize distrub your activity time. I want give information for you about Tax of course. My opinion is very good If employee follow tax of course. It name is Brevet of Tax. Course addres is flamboyan street in Padang city and follow with top University of Andalas.

I think, this benefit for our corporate because corporate want employees knowledgeable about tax in the country and very easy make financial report. We are unnecessary use officials tax of public. This losse expense for cash flow corporate.

I hope this corporates provide to me facility example time of work, rent of car and could help me support cash during follow course of tax . After this I can start work with knowledgeable complete about of tax. I can help your corporate make financial report very good. I hope your understand and approve my opinion.

Your faithfully

Wahyu

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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course: 4

about: 3

follow: 3

corporate: 3

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Task Response

The letter addresses the task by providing details of the course, explaining its usefulness, and suggesting how the company could help. However, there are some issues with clarity and coherence that affect the overall task response.

Coherence & Cohesion

There are some coherence and cohesion issues in the letter. The flow of ideas is somewhat disrupted due to the lack of clear paragraphing and some abrupt transitions between sentences. Using more cohesive devices and organizing the content into paragraphs would improve the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

While the letter demonstrates an attempt to use a range of vocabulary, there are several inaccuracies and awkward phrasings that hinder the lexical resource score. Focus on using more precise and appropriate vocabulary to convey your ideas effectively.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are noticeable grammatical errors throughout the letter, including issues with verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Proofreading for grammar and sentence construction would enhance the grammatical accuracy of your writing.

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