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Band 5+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear Sir or Madam,

Good Morning. I am Maulita, junior Geologist staff. I am writing this letter to let you know that there will be training course for introduction of geology modeling. The course opens for limited employees and will open registration at April 24th – 30th, 2024.

Furthermore, to join the course, employees can give the permission letter from the company and register via company e-mail. I need your support to allow me to join this course. Company can support me with registering me via e-mail, give me permission during the training, and give me transport and accommodations. Because of the developments of application and digital sciences, this course is so important to geologist and scientists. This course teaches us how to operate geology modeling apps, and explain the principles of geology modeling. Taking this course means upgrade our skills as geologist and following developments needed in the future, and also give a positive impact for our company to developing our projects in the future.

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Overall Band Score

5.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
C1 - Intricate
Strive to incorporate even richer and more precise language.

Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 7

company: 4

geologist: 3

geology: 3

modeling: 3

Try using synonyms for the above words

Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses the task by describing the training course, explaining how the company could help, and stating the usefulness of the course for the job. To improve, consider providing more specific details about the course and how it directly relates to your current job responsibilities.

Coherence & Cohesion

5.5

The letter is mostly coherent and cohesive, with ideas presented logically. However, there are some minor lapses in cohesion that could be improved by using transition words more effectively to connect ideas and improve the flow of the letter.

Lexical Resource

5.5

There is a good range of vocabulary used throughout the letter, but some terms could be more precise. Try to incorporate more technical terms related to geology modeling to demonstrate a deeper understanding of the subject matter.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

5.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of grammatical structures and is mostly accurate. Pay attention to subject-verb agreement and article usage to further enhance grammatical accuracy.

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