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Band 4+: you work for an international company. You have been seen an advertisement for a training course which will be useful for your job. write a letter to your manager .in your letter describe the training course you want to do explain what the company could do to help you say how the course will be useful for your job

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Dear sir/madam,

I am writing this letter to express my interest to join the skill enhancement course from BIS University.

• I desired to learn the Structural designing course from the university because we have not professional structural consultants team for tendering the high level projects like multi storey building and Tower structures therefore, I should learn that skills for company transformation purpose.

• My Company should be take entire responsibilities such as transportation, course fee, and internship, food and accommodation also would be provide these service because it is assist for the company innovation mode.

• The structural designing course has been ample of beneficial to the company for example of most of the customer is frequently transformed to their concept like they all requesting to additional specialities on top floor therefore, we need an excellent structural engineer. When I have accomplice that subjects after we will see massive amount of customers arrive to the office business deal purpose.

I look forward to hearing from you.

Prakash. A

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
C2 - Complex
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

course: 4

structural: 4

company: 4

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Task Response

5.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and organized for better clarity.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's organization and flow could be improved. The use of bullet points is not ideal for a formal letter. Grammatical errors affect the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

5

The vocabulary used is sufficient but lacks range and precision in places. More sophisticated language would enhance the letter's impact.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3

Numerous grammatical errors significantly impact the clarity and overall quality of the letter. Improved grammatical accuracy is essential.

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