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Band 4+: You would like to invite a foreign friend to visit you for your birthday Write a letter inviting your friend. In your letter: tell your friend about your birthday explain how much the visit would mean to you suggest that your friend stays at your house for the visit

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Dear Ali,

I am going well and i hope you are going well. I write this letter to you for invite you on my birthday. My birthday on 01 December 2005. so i invite you please attend my birthday event.

My birthday will celebrate on Sunday so i invite you and your family attend my birthday celebration. i hope you should attend my birthday function. please come on time. Make sure your time table.

My birthday will celebrate in pc hotel which is near to your home. your hometown is very beautiful. My birthday event is very importan for me because i born on this day. so i should celebrate my birth day.

And i invite you to visit my home and see my home. My home is neat and clean . There are a lot of plants in my neigbourhood. you enjoy very much in my home on my birthday. I hope you should keep your time.

your best friend,

haider ali

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Overall Band Score

4.5

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Vocabulary Complexity:
A1 - Beginner
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

birthday: 9

invite: 4

attend: 3

celebrate: 3

should: 3

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Task Response

5.5

The letter addresses the task but lacks detail and clarity in several areas. More information about the birthday celebration and the reasons for the invitation would improve the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

4.5

The letter's structure is somewhat disjointed, and the flow of ideas could be improved. Better paragraphing and clearer transitions would enhance coherence.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary used is adequate but lacks range and precision. More sophisticated word choices would improve the overall lexical resource.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the overall clarity and understanding. Improving grammatical accuracy is crucial for a higher score.

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