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Band 4+: You would like to take some time off work to attend a training course. Write a letter to your manager. In your letter: - Provide details of the training course - Explain why it would be beneficial for your work - Suggest how you will manage your workload during the time off

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Dear Sir/Madame

I’m writing to seek your permission to take some time off work in order to attend a training course held by a large company that scheduled in İzmir from 10.09.2024 to 12.09.2024. The aim of the training course is Business Managament Skills.

Primarly, I stronly believe this training course will enhance my abilities to contribute more to our ongoing projects and it held by a company renowned its cutting-edge business management techniques. In my absence, I propose to delegate my works to my collauge Ahmet who has enough experience and well-skilled on our ongoing works. Nevertheless, to avoid any distruption and ensure a smooth workflow I’ll stay in close contact with him in every details. Additionally, after the training course I anticipate our Project outcomes will be enchanced and exclusived.

I’m waiting for your positive response at your earliest convenience to granting me to join the training course. If you need more information please do not hesitate to contact me.

Yours Sincerely.

Berkan

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Overall Band Score

4.5

(+/- 0.5)

Vocabulary Complexity:
B2 - Upper Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

training: 5

course: 5

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all aspects of the task. The details of the training course are provided, and the benefits for work are explained. The letter also suggests a plan for managing the workload during the time off.

Coherence & Cohesion

4

The letter is generally coherent, but there are some grammatical errors that affect the flow of the message. The paragraphing could be improved for better clarity.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The letter demonstrates a good range of vocabulary, but there are some errors in word choice and collocations. The use of vocabulary is generally appropriate for the task.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains a number of grammatical errors, including incorrect verb tenses, articles, and prepositions. The errors affect the overall clarity and accuracy of the message.

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