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Band 5+: You would like to work overseas, write a letter to an employment agency. Write: - what job you would like to apply - what companies are you looking for - why do you want to work overseas

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Dear Sir/Medam

I am writing this letter in regard to make an request for my work. I completed higher national diploma in food technology, in 2021. Now I am working as a quality checker in a seafood export company that called as Annai seafood. So I like to work in overseas companies.

I like to work companies which is related to seafood, because I had three years experiance in that related field.Moreover I am knoe about what kind of seafood products moslty liked by foreigen people.

Current days my olny goal is working in overseas, since already I have mentioned about my jobs. That company giving salary is not enough for me. I beleive, if working in out countries I can earn more, because I have enoungh talent regard what other nations organization expect from me.

This is the main reasons for I am expecting overseas work. So I kindly request to you please arrange a suitable job for me in other nations.

Thank you for your attention for this mater.

Sincerely,

Thanesh.

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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seafood: 4

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overseas: 3

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. However, the response could be more detailed and structured for a higher score.

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The letter's message is mostly understandable. However, the numerous grammatical errors and awkward phrasing affect the overall flow and cohesion. Improved sentence structure and clearer transitions would significantly enhance readability.

Lexical Resource

4.5

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Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that hinder understanding and impact the overall score. Significant improvement in grammar and punctuation is needed.

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