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Band 5+: Your child is going on a trip to another country for a week. The school authority is looking for some parents who can join the trip. You are interested in going with the children. Write a letter to the head of the school. In your letter, say why you want to join the team mention what you can do to assist also ask questions related to the trip

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Dear sir

I am writing to let you know that i am intrigued to join the trip of another country in which both parents and children can enjoy it.

First of all ,i found this trip as great opportunity to explore veitnam , i always had a dream to visit this country for atleast once in a life . Moreover , with my child it would make a cherry on top and now , i can also help my child to releive stress of studies.

However including me in this journey ,would be best for your team because i am a doctor, hope my skills will ghelp your team in emergency situation and also my jokes will help to remove boredom among youngsters.

Furthermore, i am curious to know that what places we will visit in veitnam and where we will live foer a week in the new country . Hope there will be no problem with my presence.

your faithfully,

Pragat singh

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Overall Band Score

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Vocabulary Complexity:
B1 - Intermediate
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Grammar Mistakes: N/A

Vocabulary Repetition:

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Task Response

6.5

The letter adequately addresses all parts of the task. Minor improvements in clarity and structure would enhance the response.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter's message is mostly clear, but some improvements in logical flow and paragraphing would enhance readability. The numerous grammatical errors negatively impact the overall coherence.

Lexical Resource

4.5

The vocabulary used is appropriate, but a wider range and more precise word choices would improve the overall lexical resource. Some expressions could be more natural and sophisticated.

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

3.5

The letter contains numerous grammatical errors that affect the clarity and fluency of the writing. Significant improvement in grammatical accuracy is needed to achieve a higher score.

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