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Band 6+: Your English-speaking friend who lives in your town has asked for your advice about learning a new sport. Write an email to you friend. In your email: Recommend a new sport that would be suitable for your friend to learn Explain how your friend could learn this sport Suggest that you learn this sport together.

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Dear Nasrin,

It’s wonderful to heard from you. I’m so glad about your decision to start phsiycal activity and writing to give you some advice about our town’s sport centres.

Due to your stressful work, I can strongly recommend you to engage in tennis courses, which plays a vital role in people’s lives. Not only does tennis boost your confidence, but also relieves your tension from daily routine. I know you compeletly eligible for this sport, since your resilience and stamina.

For starting this journey, I can introcude my professional coach, Mr. Ahmadi who has been the most famous trainer in our city. In addition, I have a span racket, which I can barrow you for practicing.

I would suggest participating in tis course together, which help us to share our energy and to encourage each other for econtinue this programe.

I hope to see you as soon as possible. I look forward spending enjoyable times together.

Best wishes,

Alaleh

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B2 - Upper Intermediate
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which: 3

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Task Response

The letter adequately addresses the task by recommending a sport, explaining how to learn it, and suggesting learning together. There are a few minor grammatical errors and awkward phrasings (e.g., "phsiycal activity", "compeletly eligible", "span racket", "econtinue this programe"). To improve, focus on refining sentence structure and ensuring accurate word choice. Also, ensure the tone is consistently friendly and informal, as befitting a letter to a friend.

Coherence & Cohesion

The letter is generally coherent, but the flow could be improved with better transitions between ideas. Paragraphing is adequate, but consider using shorter paragraphs to make the letter more readable. For example, the paragraph discussing how to learn tennis could be split into two, separating the coach introduction from the racket offer.

Lexical Resource

The vocabulary is adequate for the task, but there are some inaccuracies ('phsiycal' instead of 'physical', 'barrow' instead of 'lend'). Expanding your range of vocabulary and ensuring accuracy would enhance your writing. Consider using synonyms to avoid repetition (e.g., instead of repeating 'sport', use 'activity' or 'exercise').

Grammatical Range & Accuracy

There are several grammatical errors that affect clarity. Examples include 'heard' instead of 'hear', incorrect verb tenses, and awkward phrasing ('compeletly eligible'). Focus on improving your understanding and application of verb tenses, subject-verb agreement, and sentence structure. Proofreading carefully for these errors before submitting your work is crucial.

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